let's have a pentecost;
a turmoil of tongues
leaping
tongues of flame
to purge this
soul
wondering,
wandering
words
flashes,
distorted images
Racing
in
my
Head!
a m i l l i o n p i e c e s o f a j i g s a w
scattered bits floating in the wind
wandering,
wondering.
No padded walls
No strait jackets
for this demented soul.
Asylum. This body.
trapped for an eternity.
breath shortening,
choking!
no more.
There is no tomorrow,
only yesterdays of sorrow.
As shattered dreams pierce my sole,
like thorns driven into my blackened soul.
a turmoil of tongues
leaping
tongues of flame
to purge this
soul
wondering,
wandering
words
flashes,
distorted images
Racing
in
my
Head!
a m i l l i o n p i e c e s o f a j i g s a w
scattered bits floating in the wind
wandering,
wondering.
No padded walls
No strait jackets
for this demented soul.
Asylum. This body.
trapped for an eternity.
breath shortening,
choking!
no more.
There is no tomorrow,
only yesterdays of sorrow.
As shattered dreams pierce my sole,
like thorns driven into my blackened soul.
16 comments:
First??????
Wow this must be lucky week or sumthin
Going 2 read the post will be back!!!
Sounds deep, thought i glimpsed hope, and then hopelesness. One thing's sure though: There's talk of madness.
I think i'd better investigate.
Rayo sweerie.....
Dis ur poem is screamin despair too much o....wat gwan?
drips despair like icicles blasted by fiery blasts of Saharan tempests drip water..... I really hope this is only a mental exercise...
deep and so deep
Beautifully written...
beautifully structured...
despair rating :off the charts..
wetin dey?
*first time here*
Dark,mystifying-a struggle with emotions...
I like*
this is deep and kind of sad....
em, Rayo, se kosi? nice poem and all that, but written from very very deep deep deep.
u re beginning to sound like him!
love the 'asthetics'of the poem.
I hope u r fine cos this sounds...somehow!
ROTFL!
Simply put, this poem announces say u don craze be that!
O my Rayo!
Nice one, sha!
I wish I wrote that...
Good thing you checked out Chizitere.
@oyinkan; i did not see u drop anor comment afta readin oh. lol
@she; madness, weeellll. maybe
@qube; maybe its just a poem oh, but rili i dont know
@akabagucci; kinda hope so too
@standtall; deep? i don't know, its just freaky i think
@beulah; thanks
@chayoma; thanks 4 comin by. was just scribbling, still tryna figure out if i was just writing, or writing me...
@blogoratti; thanks
@BSNC; yeah i kno
@uzezi; zayzee, me sef i dont know oh
@musco; guess i'm not familiar enuf with 'his' works to know. but then i'll take that as a compliment.
@JD;i hope so too
@SEVERUS; thanks. yeah i think i'm goin off the deep end. lol.
THIS IS WHAT I AM TAKING ABOUT! THIS IS WONDERFUL...THE POEM THAT IS!!!!!!!!!!
But wait o! Hope say you no dey possessed?lol
freaking deep yeah-lol
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