the hands of the clock are spinning out of control... the end looms, threatening to crush my soul... the past has crept into the future. It waits... nothing can hold these demons back any longer...
To say "you dey write" is a sad sad understatement... The brevity of this piece in no way undermines its message: in fact it strengthens it. I could feel exactly what the words mean cos I jave experienced that state of mind many times... It's hard to explain- this definitely made a connection with me sha... (as the best poetry does... ) Well done. :)
12 comments:
deep
typical rayo....classic, deep
hmmmm...
"The past has crept into the future,"
Hmmm...
hmmmm. ope al is well!!
This is one is quite cryptic but sure something can hold them back. Take care alright?
To say "you dey write" is a sad sad understatement... The brevity of this piece in no way undermines its message: in fact it strengthens it. I could feel exactly what the words mean cos I jave experienced that state of mind many times... It's hard to explain- this definitely made a connection with me sha... (as the best poetry does... ) Well done. :)
short n insightful
Nice...
definitely more to this ...!
Reflective
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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